Notes for paragraph 1
the intruduction moves from general to specific:
> open with a short orientation(introduce the topic with a general, broad opening sentence,or two; answer the question with a thesis statement; and
proved a summary or ‘road map’ of the essay, keep it brief, but mention all the main idea).
Notes supporting first point of view:
Criticism of this point of view
>doesn’t bring back the loved one but while, this is obuiously true, it doses give families some comfort lowing the person who took the life on thier loved one is dead.
Notes for paragraph 2
many countries have abolished the death penalty
Notes supporting second point of view
>innocent people will be executed
> racist organisation the more african American recive the death penalty than white people
criticism of this point of view
> now we have DNA testing innocent pepole are unlikely to be wrongfully sentenced to death
> statistic from 20009 show more white pepole were executed then african Americans.